pls correct my statement

[startEnglish]

1. When(If) the temperature exceeds its threshold, a message is(will be) displayed to allow user to continue or exit.

2. The software application recieves the status(or statuses) of the equipment and displays on the Main Page.

3.The user powers up (turns on) the equipment.

Thank you!

[billmcd]

1. When(If) the temperature exceeds its threshold, a message is(will be) displayed to allow user to continue or exit. Either "when/if"; either "is/will be".

2. The software application recieves the status(or statuses) of the equipment and displays it on the Main Page. Status

3.The user powers up (turns on) the equipment. Either is OK in current use.

Thank you!

b.