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[MAJSH]

As instructed, on (date) at 15.00 hrs our driver delivered the items to M/Sxxx but they did not receive the items and asked him to wait until the concerned person to inspect and receive it , but our driver has one more delivery and collection to be made before those shops are closing, so he told them he would be back when he finished with urgent delivery & collection. He had handed over this items to them same day after his urgent delivery

[bhaisahab]

As instructed, on (date) at 15.00 hrs our driver delivered the items to M/Sxxx. They would not take/accept the items but asked him to wait until the concerned person came to inspect and receive them. Our driver had one more delivery and collection to make before that shop closed, so he told them he would be back when he finished with the urgent delivery & collection. He handed over the items to them same day, after his urgent delivery.

Bhai.