should the time come first or after an adverb

[kwfine]

Dear teachers,

I am writing some sentences in my:
But I don't know whether they are correct or not:

1.
I am trying to recall my memory and write some interesting things that happened in my childhood in my diary.

2.
The first time I watched Movie A on TV was 3 years ago when I was a teenager.

Please help, teachers.

Thank you

Kitty

[emsr2d2]

Dear teachers,

I am writing some sentences in my:
But I don't know whether they are correct or not:

1.
I am trying to recall my memory and write some interesting things that happened in my childhood in my diary.

2.
The first time I watched Movie A on TV was 3 years ago when I was a teenager.

Please help, teachers.

Thank you

Kitty

We don't say "recall my memory". You might say "recall some memories/a memory".

1. I am trying to recall some childhood memories and write them in my diary.

2. The first time I watched "Movie" was three years ago, when I was [still] a teenager.

Note that that suggests that you are no longer a teenager.

By the way, your post has nothing to do with your title - there are no adverbs involved.