Sentence correction

[drmythri]

"I not only vaccinated patients, but also took part in work shops educating patients and my peers about liver diseases"

Can this sentence sound better.
Please help!!!

[Temico]

"I not only vaccinated patients, but also took part in work shops educating patients and my peers about liver diseases"

"I not only vaccinated patients, but also took part in work shops which were (for) educating patients and my peers about liver diseases"

(BTW, if you don't add the adj. clause "which....", the sentence can be read as "I not only .....but also I took part in .......educating patients and my peers about liver diseases", which is of course, not what you mean.)

[hayriye kayi]

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1."I not only vaccinated patients, but also took part in work shops to educate patients and my peers about liver diseases"
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2."I not only vaccinated patients, but also took part in work shops by educating patients and my peers about liver diseases"


but there is a slight difference in meaning btw these two sentences

[Temico]

but there is a slight difference in meaning btw(between?) these two sentences

Is the above meant to be a statement or a question, may I ask?