Plz check the grammer

[swapnas]

Hi, Expecting Grammatic and sentence formation inputs for below note.


State of Mind:
Lazy mood with no interest to work,struggling to get the concentration on work.
It would have been good ,if we have a robot with us,which can do our work
when we are sick ,lazy mood and multitasking.

Ahhh ! what an Lazy Idea...but who will incurr the expenses for robot ?
Leave the Idea...Just concentrate on work for some time and try to finish 50 %
of todays work.

[tedtmc]

Hi, Expecting Grammatic and sentence formation inputs for below note.


State of Mind:
Lazy mood with no interest to work,struggling to get the concentration on to work.
This is not a complete sentence but I understand it is common with blogs.

It would have been good ,(delete comma)if we have a robot with us, which can do our work when we are sick , in a lazy mood and multitasking.

Ahhh ! what an Lazy Idea a lazy idea...but who will incurr bear the expenses for a robot ?

Leave the Idea...Just concentrate on work for some time and try to finish 50 %
of today' s work.

not a teacher

[swapnas]

Hello..

Thank You for inputs..