Personal statement question
I would like to ask you about my CV personal statement correctness. I would be grateful for any comments especially grammar issues but also general errors (too short / long). It may also sound overconfident but actually it is all true and can be proved.
My experience covers about 10 years of software development including 4 years of work on state of the art telecommunication equipment. I am able to read and understand extremely large code bases very quickly and as a result I was always put on the front line of major company events like knowledge transfers, project takeovers and special teams’ membership.
I'm certain I could make significant contribution to your company and at the same time extend my current knowledge and experience.
Thank you in advance,
Re: Personal statement question
1. state-of-the-art - hyphenated word
Originally Posted by linyogo
2. I'm certain I could - I am certain I can (certainty - can)
extend enhance my current knowledge and experience
not a teacher
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