Hi

[leeleev]

please help me correct this sentence:

Of course, conferences are not just about the food provided. Especially when the conference planners take the time to recruit unique and well-known speakers. This can make an average conference quite rewarding, well worth the missed work to attend.

[TheParser]

please help me correct this sentence:

Of course, conferences are not just about the food provided. Especially when the conference planners take the time to recruit unique and well-known speakers. This can make an average conference quite rewarding, well worth the missed work to attend.

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you must accept the teacher's answer) that your teacher would be happy if you

rewrote it as:

Of course, conferences are not just about the food provided, especially when

the conference planners take the time to recruit unique and well-known speakers.

This can make an average conference quite rewarding and well worth the missed

work to attend.