Are these sentences natural? September 12

[musicgold]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. Can you please wake me up when it is Kinglake station ( I asked a co-passanger to wake me up when Kinglake station arrives)

2. Please make a way, someone wants off here / want to get off here.

3. I don’t know which side the next station comes on. ( which side of the subway train)

Thanks,
MG.

[billmcd]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. Can you please wake me up when it is when we arrive at/when we get to Kinglake station ( I asked a co-passanger to wake me up when Kinglake station arrives) Also, the station doesn't arrive. The train arrives.

2. Please make a way step aside, someone wants off here / wants to get off here.

3. I don’t know which door opens/which side of the train the door opens at the next station comes on. ( which side of the subway train)

Thanks,
MG.

b.

[musicgold]

Thanks Bill.

[5jj]

I agree with billmcd's answer, but think that you may hear people say this one, even if is not logically sound:

1. Can you please wake me up when it is Kinglake station ( I asked a [STRIKE]co[/STRIKE fellow -passaenger to wake me up when we get to Kinglake station arrives).

Bill's suggestion for this is better.