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    please correct the following writing

    After you are done with cleaning please remember to put back all cleaning materials ( bucket, duster, rags) in the cleaning room.

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    Default Re: please correct

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post
    please correct the following writing

    After you are done with cleaning please remember to put back all cleaning materials ( bucket, duster, rags) in the cleaning room.
    I think it's OK. Maybe delete "with".

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    Default Re: please correct

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post
    please correct the following writing

    After you are done with cleaning please remember to put back all cleaning materials ( bucket, duster, rags) in the cleaning room.
    No teacher!

    I'd say: When you have finished cleaning ....
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    Quote Originally Posted by februar View Post
    No teacher!

    I'd say: When you have finished cleaning ....
    Please be careful with your "No's"

    And I'd say "when you are done"/"when you are finished"/"when you finish"/"when you have completed". All are acceptable even including your response.

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    Wink Re: please correct

    I agree - thanks

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