Please correct to make it sound better

**TheShadow** · 13-Sep-2011, 23:02

Hi,

"Why are u so hold back? I just want to kiss you"

Thanks

**J&K Tutoring** · 13-Sep-2011, 23:09

Why are you holding back? I just want to kiss you.

**Bennevis** · 13-Sep-2011, 23:09

Why are you resisting me? I just want to kiss you.

Can we possibly say "Why are you holding back?" ?

**bhaisahab** · 14-Sep-2011, 08:11

Originally Posted by Bennevis

Why are you resisting me? I just want to kiss you.

Can we possibly say "Why are you holding back?" ?

Yes, we can.

**TheParser** · 14-Sep-2011, 13:00

Originally Posted by TheShadow

Hi,

"Why are u so hold back? I just want to kiss you"

Thanks

REMINDER: NOT A TEACHER

Tom: How about a little kiss?

Mona: No way! This is our first date. I'm a good girl.

Tom: Aw, c'mon. Don't be so uptight. All I'm asking for is a little

kiss, sweetie pie.

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