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  1. 15-Sep-2011, 10:19 #1
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    Dear teacher,

    if you say, " I will revise the order, which will cancel item XXX and change that to YYY"....

    Is this correct grammar?

    Thank you
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    Quote Originally Posted by idiotmike View Post
    Dear teacher,

    if you say, " I will revise the order, which will cancel item XXX and change that to YYY"....

    Is this correct grammar?

    Thank you
    I would write it like this: "I will revise the order, cancelling item XXX and substituting it with YYY."
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    Thank you very much. what about my original sentence, I am just wondering if there is anything wrong with its grammar structure? Thank you.
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    Default Re: which

    Quote Originally Posted by idiotmike View Post
    I am just wondering if there is anything wrong with its grammar structure?
    It's fine.
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