He has joined us due to our perfect history at business market.

[vectra]

Hello,

This is a sentence from my student's home assignment:

'He has joined us due to our perfect history at business market.'

I am not sure about 'due to'. What if I change the sentence this way:

He has joined us because of our formidable/excellent/impressive track record in business.

Thank you for the time and help.

[5jj]

He has joined us because of our formidable/excellent/impressive track record in business.

Much better.