Please correct the aims and objectives if they need amendment!

[nakash]

Aim of the Project:
To aware, educate and protect the Human/Labour Rights of vulnerable women Brick Makers of District Faisalabad and Toba Tek Singh through Awareness Seminars, Monthly Meetings, Theatres, and Publishing Posters.

Objectives of the Project:
1. To educate and aware the 600 illiterate, unaware and depressed brick makers (female) about their basic human rights and labour rights.

2. To built confidence and leadership qualities among these vulnerable women brick makers to struggle for the protection of their rights at brick kiln industries.

3. To promote the idea of unions and establishment of union of women brick makers for the protection of their rights.

4. To guide these vulnerable women brick makers for contacting with other human rights organizations that provides legal and Para-legal aid for these marginalized communities.

[5jj]

'To aware' is wrong. You can only 'make people aware'.

In my opinion, an objective should be measurable.

Thus, 'To make brick-makers aware of their rights' is, for me, not an objective. 'Brickmakers will show their understanding of their rights by correctly answering at least seven out of ten questions on rights" is.

[nakash]

Aim of the Project:
To aware, educate and protect the Human/Labour Rights of vulnerable women Brick Makers of District Faisalabad and Toba Tek Singh through Awareness Seminars, Monthly Meetings, Theatres, and Publishing Posters.

Objectives of the Project:
1. To educate and aware the 600 illiterate, unaware and depressed brick makers (female) about their basic human rights and labour rights.

2. To built confidence and leadership qualities among these vulnerable women brick makers to struggle for the protection of their rights at brick kiln industries.

3. To promote the idea of unions and establishment of union of women brick makers for the protection of their rights.

4. To guide these vulnerable women brick makers for contacting with other human rights organizations that provides legal and Para-legal aid for these marginalized communities.

fivejedjon,

Would you please rewrite this all according to your opinion. I will be very thankful to you.