Which are correct:
1-We went to the same dance school so there is some similarity between when I dance and when he does.
2-We went to the same dance school so you might notice some similarity between when I dance and when he does.
3-We went to the same dance school so when I dance and when he does, there is some simirlarity.
4-We went to the same dance school so when I dance and when he does you might notice some simirlarity.
#1 and #2 would mean that there is a similarity in the times of our dancing - highly unlikely.
#3 and #4 are possible but with the word order I have suggested. More natural still would be:
We went to the same dance school, so you might notoce some similarity in our dancing styles / in the way we dance.
Last edited by 5jj; 09-Oct-2011 at 06:27. Reason: typo
I think this would sound better like this:2-We went to the same dance school so you might notice some similarity between when I dance and when he does.
2-We went to the same dance school so you might notice some similarity/similarities when we dance.
Please give more helpful titles, navi, such as We went to the same dance school. We don't charge by the word.
When tells us nothing.
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