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In the movie Shawshank Redemption, author Stephen King emphasizes that the prison system dehumanizes the inmates and that there is too much corruption inside jail. He shows that the theme in the story is that crime doesn’t pay. Throughout the movie you can tell that there is a lh to commit a crime since crime never pays you back.
Everything starts by Andy wrongfully being accused of murdering his wife and her lover. He ends up in jail, and as soon as he gets in he start getting abused from everyone in there. First from Warden Norton, who happens to be the primary villain that uses the bible to quote and show Andy how morally superior he was to him and the other prisoners, constantly putting himself above the others in importance. He was so cruel that he kills Tommy Williams when he finds out he could talk and give evidence of Andy’s innocence, and for his own convenience that was not good because Norton was using Andy’s money-laundering skills.
The movie takes turn the moment Warden was so sure he was like a God, and Andy escapes jail taking the identity that Warden has created and takes all the money he had saved for years. He couldn’t go anywhere since he found himself in a room with empty pockets, he just couldn’t accept this and takes the decision to take his own life by shooting himself with a gun. What was ironic is that when he opens the Bible he founds the little hummer that Andy had used to escape jail. This action from Warren Norton shows you that “crime doesn’t pay”, whatever you do, you will get caught.
Like Warden Norton, a foreman of the prison guard named Hadley. He is an intemperate guard who thinks nothing of delivering beatings to the inmates to keep them in line and his brutally is shown a few times during the movie. Andy gets the risk to be beaten by him when in the rooftop he hears his comment by how unhappy he was about inheriting an amount of money from a cousin because of some problems, then he as a legal tax prepare offers him-self to do his to make him happy. During the movie he makes peace with Andy for his own convenience. At the end of the movie, he was arrested since he was behind all Warden’s corruptions. According to Red, “he cried like a girl” when he was getting arrested. By this, once again you can tell that crime doesn’t pay.
There was a meanest inmate in jail, his name was Boggs who was a leader of the “the sisters”, a gang that enjoyed raping and Andy was a victim. He beats Andy so bad, but luckly he was in peace with Hadley and he responds by beating Boggs until he paralyze him from the beat he got for beating Andy. Boggs had to move to another jail, so Andy didn’t get any maltreats from any other inmate. The other way around, all the other mates felt great about Andy because he has gone so many good things for them. He had gotten in trouble with Warden, just so the prisoners in jail could listen to music and feel great about it. Andy's willingness to set up the transaction for the cost of beer for the tarring crew wins Hadley's respect. It also earns the respect of the inmates, especially when Andy gives his share of the beer to the others, as he had been drunk at the time of his alleged crime, Andy now refrains from drinking alcohol. Through Andy's budgeting and purchasing activities, the library is expanded and remodeled into the Brooks Hatlen Memorial Library, which was the "best prison library in New England". Andy have done so many good things for the inmates that they all would respect Andy.

From all the guys in jail, Andy felt more affection in one in particular, Ellis Redding also called “Red”, an older African-American inmate, which everyone recognized him for beingcleverly smuggling in contraband or as “the guy who can get it for you”. After a month of adjusting to his new life, Andy approaches Red and asks him to get a rock hammer, intending to pursue a hobby of rock collecting. Red supplies the hammer for ten dollars, and later fulfills Andy's request for a poster of Rita Hayworth. The hummer clearly represents Andy’s persistence, which at the end pays off and the poster represents a harmless tool, but on the other way also is his hidden strength.
Red would have never thought that between them there would be an incredible relationship.
Furthemore, by giving Red something to hope for (the box hidden beneath the oak tree), Andy helps motivate him not to give up after his escape. Andy’s redemption is twofold. First, he ends his wrongful imprisonment, and then he does his best to bring justice to the prison system in return for the injustices that were done to him. Second, and more importantly, he redeems himself for the mistakes that he made with his wife. In his final pre-escape conversation with Red, Andy tells him that he was responsible for his wife’s death because he didn’t know how to show her he loved her and thus drove her away. In light of this realization, Andy changes the pattern with his friend Red by telling him about the box beneath the oak tree. This shows Red that he loves him; it is an effort both to help him survive the rest of his sentence and give him something to do once he finally gets out. By helping to save Red’s life, he redeems himself for his small role in his wife’s death
Throughout the film there has been a main symbol, which is another use of language. The symbol of Jesus Christ. Andy represents Jesus Christ as freedom and hope was a main factor. His out-stretched hands after tumbling out of human wastage pipe represents, Jesus Christ on the cross. The last judgments when the Warden learns his fate, “Salvation lay within” Andy Dufresne writes set in the book of exodus.
Stephen King definitely throughout the movie shows you that for him “crime doesn’t pay”. Andy at the end was able to escape to follow his happiness he invites Red to share those moments with him. The movie have different ways in ironic ways to tell you that no bad last forever.