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    tarpius is offline Newbie
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    Default Please teach me fix this sentence

    There is plenty a way to entertainted ourselves. Do you prefer book? what book do you want to read? What's goal by reading book?.Just want to pass a time? education? increase knowledge?. I said dont buy book if you just want to waste your money. Buy book for a reason !.Don't buy it just because it's a trend. Do you prefer movies? what movies do you want to watch? there's a plenty movies out there. Don't buy dvd or Bluray movies cause it's on a top ten watch list. Top ten does'nt mean you will like it.View a trailer first. In this way You will not disppointed after you buy. Do you prefer listening on music?. What music do you like?. Buy music that worth to buy.

    Sometime We prefer reading a book rather than watching Movies or Tv. Here are the benefit from reading a book :
    For Brain. It's train our brain not to forget. Dont trust me? Try reading the whole month.
    Reducing stress. A good book with a good word will make you more relax.
    Prevent from Alzheimer decease. By reading book our brain continously get stimulate by word. According research that I read can stimulate brain cell and reduce memory loss.
    Reading Became our natural clock for sleep. When you read before you sleep, the body will adjust automatically. After you read our body will react and felt asleep. It's work for me.

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    Gillnetter is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: Please teach me fix this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by tarpius View Post
    There is are plenty a of ways to entertainted entertain ourselves. Do you prefer books, what book do you want to read? What's your goal by reading a book, do you just want to pass a the time? Education? Increase your knowledge? I said dont say don't buy a book if you just want to waste your money. Buy a book for a reason !.Don't buy it just because it's a trend. Do you prefer movies? what movies do you want to watch? there's are plenty of movies out there. Don't buy dvd DVD or Bluray movies because it'sthey're on a top ten watch list. Top ten does'nt doesn't mean you will like it.View a trailer first. In this way You will not disppointed be disappointed after you buy. Do you prefer listening on to music?. What music do you like?. Buy music that is worth to buy.

    Sometime we prefer reading a book rather than watching movies or Tv TV. Here are the benefits from reading a book.
    For the brain. It'sIt will train our brain not to forget. Don't trust me? Try reading the whole month.
    Reducing stress. A good book with a good word will make you more relaxed.
    Prevent from Alzheimer decease disease. By reading a book our brain continuously get stimulated by the words. According to research that I read it can stimulate brain cell and reduce memory loss.
    Reading Became becomes our natural clock for sleep. When you read before you sleep, the body will adjust automatically. After you read your body will react and felt fall asleep. It's work It works for me.
    You need to work on your grammar and sentence construction. With some work you can do it.

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