guiding me marching on my road

[ziawj2]

Are these two sentences acceptable to native speakers? Thank you!
Ever since I was born, you are an everlasing shinning star, guiding me marching on my road when I take every step forward. / Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me marching on the my road with every step I take.

Are these two sentences acceptable to native speakers? Thank you!
My mum is tender.
My mum is gentle.

[Raymott]

Are these two sentences acceptable to native speakers? Thank you!
Ever since I was born, you are (no)an everlasing shinning star, guiding me marching on my road when I take every step forward. No, forget this one.

Ever since I was born, you have been (yes) an everlasting star, guiding me marching as I march on the my road, with every step I take.


Are these two sentences acceptable to native speakers? Thank you!
My mum is tender.
My mum is gentle.

Yes, they're OK.