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    Danix is offline Newbie
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    Default Please help me with my Biography

    I am a amateur photographer who is working in a print shop as a graphic designer. I am putting together my pictures to create the calendar 2012 for my company. It requires a little bio on the last page. I have written out what I want to say but very likely there are tons of mistakes in grammar. I really hope someone can help me to correct them or rewrite the bio. This could be my only chance to make my calendar and I have to make it good. Really don't want to see the whole thing ruined by my bio page.

    Here it is:

    Danix Cher is a graphic designer ever since she finished school. Her interest of photography has been raised while she studied full time art and design course for three years. The course has rooted a fundamental of art appreciation in her heart.


    In 2004 she started to take pictures regularly as she hiked along the trails in conservation areas with her husband. Two years later they joined the Toronto Camera Club and participate in club competitions as well as the interclub and international ones. She has won The Distinguished Canadian Photographer Award – 117th Toronto International Salon of Photography, and several awards from CAPA, FIAP, GTCCC, TCC and Glennie.


    Her images are varying in topics with the major interest in nature photography. From landscapes to insects, she explores a whole new world and start learning about the nature.



    She is very thankful for this beautiful nature Canada has given to her.

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    Default Re: Please help me with my Biography

    Quote Originally Posted by Danix View Post
    I am a amateur photographer who is working in a print shop as a graphic designer. I am putting together my pictures to create the calendar 2012 for my company. It requires a little bio on the last page. I have written out what I want to say but very likely there are tons of mistakes in grammar. I really hope someone can help me to correct them or rewrite the bio. This could be my only chance to make my calendar and I have to make it good. Really don't want to see the whole thing ruined by my bio page.

    Here it is:

    Danix Cher is has been a graphic designer ever since she finished school. Her interest of photography has been raised was increased while when took a three year she studied full time art and design course for three years. The course has rooted a fundamental of art appreciation of art in her heart.


    In 2004 she started to take pictures regularly as she hiked along the trails in conservation areas with her husband. Two years later they joined the Toronto Camera Club and participate in club competitions as well as the inter-club and international ones. She has won The Distinguished Canadian Photographer Award – 117th Toronto International Salon of Photography, and several awards from CAPA, FIAP, GTCCC, TCC and Glennie.


    Her images are varying in topics with the major interest in being nature photography. From landscapes to insects, she explores a whole new world and as she starts learning about the nature.



    She is very thankful for this the beauty of beautiful nature that Canada has and for the opportunity to see and photograph the natural beauty of Canada.given to her.
    Gil

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    Smile Re: Please help me with my Biography

    Thanks a lot Gil!!

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