I need to know if these sentences are correct.

[sergiofreeman69]

hi there!

1.all of a sudden everything seemed to callapse (my desease seemed to be the straw that broke my camel back) but now, we are getting out of a fix Thanks God once again.
2.I'm not sure if her affidavit would be enough for all my family,she is going to find out about it, I want you to let me know if would be possible obtain one from you.

Many thanks

[5jj]

1.spacea All of a sudden, everything seemed to caollapse (my descease seemed to be the straw that broke my the camel's back), but now, we are getting out of a the fix, T thanks God once again.
This is unlikely to be uttered. You say things collapse after your decease, i.e., after your death.
2.spaceI'm not sure if her affidavit would be enough for all my family,. s She is going to find out about it,. I want you to let me know if it would be possible obtain one from you.