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Dear Brother,

How are you in UK and I hope all is fine with you. As you know that the staff salary for the month of November is due on 1st December 2011 but the expected commission from GM & Company is not received yet and may be received in the next week on December.In the mean time Can you lend me $5,000/- to settle staff salary this amount will be refunded to you when I get the money from GM & Company.Please also lend me $1000/- for my personal use.

thanking you

best regards,
meela