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    Default Is this sentence correct ?

    Dear all,

    By 2007, the average house price had risen to almost £190,000, prior to falling back to just under £150,000 in 2008.

    many thanks

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    Default Re: Is this sentence correct ?

    "Prior to" can sound a bit formal at times. You could easily replace it with "before."

    By 2007, the average house price had risen to almost £190,000 before falling back to just under £150,000 in 2008.

    Please note that I removed the comma after the initial price. I feel that it makes the sentence flow more naturally.

    John

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    Default Re: Is this sentence correct ?

    I'd leave the comma in, but that's just personal peference.
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