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    Default who attended a mixed school by their early 40s

    It shows that boys taught in singlesex schools are more likely to be divorced or separated from their partner than those who attended a mixed school by their early 40s.
    (Why single-sex schools are bad for your health (if you're a boy); The Independent)

    Is it Okay to paraphrase the sentence in the following way:

    "It shows that boys taught in singlesex schools are more likely to be divorced or separated from their partner by their early 40s than those who attended a mixed school."

    Thanks.

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    Default Re: who attended a mixed school by their early 40s

    Quote Originally Posted by suprunp View Post
    It shows that boys taught in singlesex schools are more likely to be divorced or separated from their partner than those who attended a mixed school by their early 40s.
    (Why single-sex schools are bad for your health (if you're a boy); The Independent)

    Is it Okay to paraphrase the sentence in the following way:

    "It shows that boys taught in singlesex schools are more likely to be divorced or separated from their partner by their early 40s than those who attended a mixed school."

    Thanks.
    I believe that your rendition is much better than the original. The original seems to say that those who attended a mixed school while they were in their early 40s are less likely to become divorced or separated than those who attended a single sex school.

    What is the location of this publication (The Independent)? They seem to have a rather unique manner of writing. For example, I found this bit in The Independent -

    "From the time he riveted attention as the brilliant baby of the beautifully balanced Leeds United midfield which was so integral to the Yorkshiremen's league title triumph of 1991-92, right through until he presided inspirationally over the unexpected recent renaissance of Wales as a force in international football, Gary Speed, who has apparently committed suicide, barely put a foot wrong."
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