Dear all,
Is this sentence correct ?
Being an Indonesian with Japanese heritage living in California has made him appreciate traditional-fabric pattern designs, hand made cultures, japanese and european aesthetics.
Many thanks
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I'm not sure it literally makes sense. Firstly, what are hand-made cultures? Secondly, I'm not sure that being an Indonesian of Japanese heritage living in California would make him appreciate (in the sense of like) anything. I would use this form:
Being an Indonesian of Japanese heritage living in California, he appreciated...
Are the hand-made cultures crafts?
Yes, the hand-made cultures crafts
Thanks for all your kindness to answer my question