Are these sentences natural? December 6

[musicgold]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. It is very hard to achieve even one of these objectives. If you could achieve one, you are million dollars.

2. I can’t even bear to think about something like that happening to me.

3. I thought they stopped/ have stopped showing their extravagant parties as client events.

Thanks,
MG.

[Gillnetter]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. It is very hard to achieve even one of these objectives. If you could achieve one, you are million dollars. No. It is very hard to achieve even one of these objectives. If you could achieve even one you are successful.

2. I can’t even bear to think about something like that happening to me. OK

3. I thought they stopped/ have stopped showing their extravagant parties as client events. I thought they had stopped having extravagant parties as client events.

Thanks,
MG.

Gil

[musicgold]

Thanks Gil.