
Originally Posted by
rainous
Not only has the husband B not shown any kind of efforts to reconcile the marriage, he has interfered with the parental visitation rights of the wife A, which was all she was asking for.
The above is a part of a court's final ruling and I was wondering whether the underlined clause meshes well with the rest of the sentence in terms of its style, given that it's a very formal court ruling?
Would there be more delicate and formal way of rephrasing it that befits the circumstance?
Thanks