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[odehfreelancer]

I will send this mail to my boss , asking salary adjustment : is it suitable ?

Dear Mr.(xx)
After four years of working with (company name), I am still looking forward for a significant and fair adjustment to my salary. In this regard, I am not asking for a normal increment – but rather a just and fair adjustment to my salary, which is equivalent to $2200 in the market.
Thank you for your attention to my request and look forward for your kind approval to review my salary adjustment.

[Bennevis]

Dear Mr.(),

After four years of working for (company name), I am still looking forward to a significant and fair adjustment to my salary. In this regard, I am not asking for a regular increment – but rather a just and fair adjustment to my salary, (comma ?) which is equivalent to $2200 in the market.

Thank you for your attention to my request. I look forward to your kindly reviewing my salary adjustment.


Yours sincerely,

(your name)