Help needed wth new game

[margaretthatcher]

Hi, I'm in the process of creating an adventure game about OfSTED and inspections. I'd be grateful if you'd have a look at it and give me your response. Thanks. You can play the DEMO here- http://myadventuregame.com/game/?Ofsted_Inside.com

[Tdol]

I got sacked for turning up late with a hangover- would that really happen with one day to go? Also, I got a bit stuck when loading up with B&H for bribes. It did remind me of one reason why I left the UK.