Sentence review

[james_2011]

Please help. I'm writing a something for work. But doesn't sound right to me. First post here, so hope someone can help.

By way of letter, dated 10th October 2011, I informed you of my intent to appeal your decision. I consider such action necessary as I have identified flaws in your findings which might have affected the outcome of your investigation.

Any help appreciated.

James

[bhaisahab]

Please help. I'm writing a something for work. But doesn't sound right to me. First post here, so hope someone can help.

By way of letter, dated 10th October 2011, I informed you of my intent to appeal your decision. I consider such action necessary as I have identified flaws in your findings which might have affected the outcome of your investigation.

Any help appreciated.

James

I would change only the beginning, "In my letter, dated 10th October 2011, I informed you of my intention..."

[james_2011]

I would change only the beginning, "In my letter, dated 10th October 2011, I informed you of my intention..."

Thanks alot, my friend.

James