
Originally Posted by
Katiemm
A. "A business deal with Michael would be beneficial to Peter."
B. "Peter agreed on a business deal with Michael."
The correctness of A leads to some confusion about B. From A, I could see that "a business deal with Michael" is a valid noun phrase, where "with Michael" modifies "a business deal".
In B, does "with Michael" modifies "business deal" or "agreed"? B has two slightly different interpretations:
B1. "Peter and Michael agreed on (signed) a business deal." Yes, except that "agreeing on" and "signing" are not synonymous. But I don't think that's your issue.
B2. "A business deal that involved Michael was agreed on (signed) by Peter." Yes, but the business deal doesn't just involve Michael. Michael is a signatory or party to the deal, and must agree on it.
For example we could say, "A deal was made by the divorcing parents involving the children." Here, the children are involved, but they have no say in the deal.
What should I do?
What are your options?