A long sentence....

[jwalitm]

Imagine a little one who needed to be delivered using obstetric forceps because he weighed over eight pounds, an infant who could cry the loudest of all in the entire post-natal ward, who could make it to the foot end of the bed within the first week of his extra uterine life, who achieved complete bladder and bowel control and could expertly run around corners at eleven months of age.


In the abovementioned sentence, I have made an attempt to dramatize the infants early milestones by constructing a long sentence. However, the word "who" keep recurring and seems awkward. Is there any other way in which the matter can be put?

Is the following solution correct?

Imagine a little one who needed to be delivered using obstetric forceps because he weighed over eight pounds, could cry the loudest of all in the entire post-natal ward, could make it to the foot end of the bed within the first week of his extra uterine life, achieved complete bladder and bowel control and could expertly run around corners at eleven months of age.

[Tdol]

It works. You could also use 'Weighing over eight pounds, he needed to be delivered', which cuts a verb down.