Need Paragraph Correction

[learning54]

Hi Teachers,
Could you correct this paragraph that I rewrote please?
It’s 11 o’clock. Susan is talking to Tom. He is phoning from Paris. “Are you having a good time? What’s the weather like? Is it raining?” she wants to know.
Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs. “Who’s she talking to? Is she still talking to Tom?” he wants to know.
“Yes Frank, she is still talking to Tom. Come on be a good boy and sleep.” is his wife’s answer.

Thanks in advance

[Rover_KE]

'Come on - be a good boy and go to sleep' is his wife's answer.

The rest is fine.

Rover

[learning54]

The rest is fine.

Rover

Hi,
Thank you very much for your reply.

Best,
L54