Re: Correction
In future, please start a new thread for each different question. It can become confusing if people respond to different questions in one thread. 
Originally Posted by
onkar
1- Come spring , day and night will be pleasant .
Grammatically fine, but unnatural. We'd probably say something like "Come spring/When spring comes, the temperature/weather will be pleasant at night as well as during the day".
2-More crucial is a distinction between what I call internalized and externalized responsibility. Fine
3-She daily showers her baby daily/every day..
4- What is your most watched movie ? What is the movie you watch most?
5- They daily transport our company raw materials. This is not a sentence.
Context is always important; labelling is rarely important.