Please need story correction (Unit 3)

[learning54]

Hi Teachers,
I rewrote these short stories, could you correct them please? Any suggestions are more than welcome. They are for low intermediate students.

#1
Arthur often goes to London. He is going there today and he went there yesterday, too. Now he is talking to an old friend. His name is Alan.

Alan: Does this train usually arrive on time?

Arthur: Yes, it does, but it didn’t yesterday. It arrived late!

#2

Now Arthur is back from London. He went there this morning. Deborah is at the train station to meet him.

Deborah: Did you have a good time in London?

Arthur: Yes, I did, and I met an old friend on the train this morning.

Deborah: Did the train get into London on time?

Arthur: No, it didn’t. It was late again!

Thanks in advance

[5jj]

They are fine, grammatically.

[learning54]

They are fine, grammatically.

Hi sir,
Thank you very much for your reply and time.

Best,
Learning