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  1. 27-Dec-2011, 10:58 #1
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    Default Please help!

    Can I improve on this from a grammar point of view? If so, what should I change?
    International company expanding, need people wanting to earn extra income part-time, without affecting what they are currently doing.
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    Default Re: Please help!

    Quote Originally Posted by InaMarais View Post
    Can I improve on this from a grammar point of view? If so, what should I change?
    International company expanding, need people wanting to earn extra income part-time, without affecting what they are currently doing.
    "An expanding international company needs people who want to earn extra income on a part-time basis, without affecting their current employment."
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