Re: Problem

Originally Posted by
onkar
Please correct the following-
1- Fielded men have been killed in a close fight.
2-They are still felt in my memory.
1. What do you mean by "fielded"? Experienced soldiers? People with extensive experience in the field?
2. They live on in my memory. I still feel them in my heart. I still remember them. There are many ways to say this. But "felt in my memory" doesn't feel natural to me.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.