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2Likes- 05-Jan-2012, 15:53 #1
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too many ins Hi,
Can somoene give some suggestions to make this phrase more stylish?
"It's a plant located in Salvador in the state of Bahia in Northern Brazil".
Three times in 's is ugly, isn't it?
- 05-Jan-2012, 15:55 #2
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Re: too many ins Not necessarily.
You could say, "It's a plant located in Salvador, in the Northern Brazilian state of Bahia".Context is always important; labelling is rarely important.
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