Hi, I'm attempting some poetry writing and I'm wondering if the following sentence is correct:
"It's hard to conceive of a feeling so profound and deep."
I'm trying to say that it's difficult to grasp mentally, since it goes beyond imagination.
Would conceive be the correct word to express this?
I really like the way it sounds especially in the context of the rhyme and meter.
Also, is there a difference between "conceive sth." and "conceive of sth."?
E.g. could I also say "conceive a feeling" in the above sentence?
Cheers!
Last edited by haiduc; 24-Jan-2012 at 09:11.
Your line is OK. The expression 'conceive a feeling' is sometimes used in the sense 'begin to have a feeling'. In 'conceive of a feeling' the person doing the conceiving is not the same person as the one who's feeling: in 'I can't conceive of anyone feeling that desperate' I'm not the one who's feeling desperate.
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Many thanks for your reply!
So if I want to say that the person conceiving is also the one who's feeling - which I want in this case - I'd need to omit the 'of'.
Does 'conceive a feeling' also have the meaning of 'mentally grasp' or does it always mean 'begin to have'?
I want to say that the person is overwhelmed by the feeling and is thus having difficulty to understand or imagine it mentally.
Thanks again!
That context makes my brain hurt. I'm not sure how it would be possible to conceive of a feeling; one could, for example, understand or sympathize with it (and if that usage of 'sympathize' bothers you, try a dictionary - it doesn't mean 'be sorry for'
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I feel the ground shifting under my feet! I don't really like 'conceive of a feeling', and 'conceive a feeling' - if it means anything - doesn't mean what you want it to mean. Let's make it more concrete by specifying an emotion: I can say 'You can't conceive of how angry I am', but I can't think what it would mean if I said 'I can't conceive of how angry I am' - I'm feeling it; if it's overwhelming, I know it's an overwhelming feeling.
But stick with the 'of' - you prefer the sound, and it means what it means in the context.
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Last edited by BobK; 26-Jan-2012 at 12:44. Reason: Clarify
Thanks a lot Bob, that has been most helpful!
If it sounds weird after all I'll just refer to my artistic freedom![]()