rewrote it considerably/considerably rewrote it

[suprunp]

But before the selection committee received the manuscript, a third party rewrote it considerably at your direction.
(H. Murakami; 1Q84)

Would it change your perception of the sentence if I rewrote it this way:
But before the selection committee received the manuscript, a third party considerably rewrote it at your direction.

Thanks.

[bhaisahab]

But before the selection committee received the manuscript, a third party rewrote it considerably at your direction.
(H. Murakami; 1Q84)

Would it change your perception of the sentence if I rewrote it this way:
But before the selection committee received the manuscript, a third party considerably rewrote it at your direction.

Thanks.

I prefer your rewrite.