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writing a business letter
Is it proper to say "we are open to receive suggestions or comments as to how to better improve our service and product."?
I was told that "better improve" is not proper but I have heard it being used.
Also, "we look forward to growing our business together with you." Is it correctly written?
Thank you for your help.
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Re: writing a business letter
I'd drop the 'better'- it's unnecessary. In the second, do you need 'together'?
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