#1  
Old 15-Nov-2005, 22:55
Newbie
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1
Default writing a business letter

Is it proper to say "we are open to receive suggestions or comments as to how to better improve our service and product."?

I was told that "better improve" is not proper but I have heard it being used.

Also, "we look forward to growing our business together with you." Is it correctly written?

Thank you for your help.
  #2  
Old 16-Nov-2005, 06:25
Editor, UsingEnglish.com
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Posts: 34,371
Home Country: UK
Native Language: British English
Current Location: Philippines
Member Type: English Teacher
Default Re: writing a business letter

I'd drop the 'better'- it's unnecessary. In the second, do you need 'together'?
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Tags
writing, business, letter


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
A letter and a business letter adorer52 Ask a Teacher 2 29-Jan-2009 23:38
English for Business: teaching writing online gwynedd_owen Teaching English 4 17-Aug-2005 14:00
letter writing Anonymous Ask a Teacher 6 10-May-2004 23:25
letter writing Anonymous Ask a Teacher 1 19-Jan-2004 10:53


All times are GMT. The time now is 07:47.



Content Relevant URLs by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.