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[skystar30097]

hello
would you correct the following sentences?

1- I always feel happy seeing my friends.
2- Most of the accidents are due to the driver's speed and sleepiness
3- Yesterday i hit a car.(i as a passenger hit a car)
4- I can't walk any longer.
5- Smoking is forbiden in public.
6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
8- I hope to achieve my dreams.
9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
11- I paticipate in election and vote.

[bhaisahab]

Please repost your thead with correct use of capitals. As an English teacher you should try to set a good example to students.

[skystar30097]

thanks for your comment !!!!

would you correct the following sentences?

1- I always feel happy seeing my friends.
2- Most of the accidents are due to the driver's speed and sleepiness.
3- Yesterday i hit a car.(i as a pedestrian hit a car)
4- I can't walk any longer.
5- Smoking is forbiden in public.
6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
8- I hope to achieve my dreams.
9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
11- I will paticipate in election and i will vote to my favourite candidate.

[bhaisahab]

Thanks for your comment!

Would you correct the following sentences please?

1- I always feel happy seeing my friends. OK.
2- Most accidents are due to the driver's speed and tiredness.
3- Yesterday I hit a car. It's grammatical.
4- I can't walk any longer. OK.
5- Smoking is forbidden in public. OK.
6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
8- I hope to achieve my dreams. OK.
9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
11- I will paticipate in election and i will vote to my favourite candidate.

Bhai.

[skystar30097]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your helpful comments, esp about using capital letters.