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Old 24-Nov-2005, 15:58
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Default Need advice for fine-tuning a sentence, thx teachers!

Does the following sentence need fine-tuning? Thanks teachers

My teacher explained to me what would happen if we didn't eat breakfast.

Please advise, thanks
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Old 24-Nov-2005, 18:32
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Hi Help Wanted,

You could be clearer by saying either -

'My teacher explained to me what would happen if I didn't eat breakfast.'
or
'Our teacher explained to us what would happen if we didn't eat breakfast.'

Hope this is of help,
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Old 25-Nov-2005, 06:39
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Default Re: Need advice for fine-tuning a sentence, thx teachers!

Thanks sooo much for your advice, Dippit. ^^
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