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    Default Help needed in Correcting the sentence

    Please check the following sentence if it is correct:
    "Acquisition / Transfer of Immovable Property in India by NRI"

    How it can be changed in better way and more attractive. It is an article title.
    Please help me.

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    Default Re: Help needed in Correcting the sentence

    This isn't a sentence as it has no subject, but does serve as an article title. As such, it's straightforward and seems fine to me. IMO, scholarly/scientific/legal articles don't often have attractive titles.
    What is NRI?
    Is "immovable property" the same as "real estate" or "real property" in AmE?

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    Default Re: Help needed in Correcting the sentence

    Yes. NRI (Non Resident Indian)
    Is "immovable property" the same as "real estate" - Yes

    Another doubt, before NRI there is no need for 'a' or 'the' right?

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    Default Re: Help needed in Correcting the sentence

    I would write "...by NRI's."

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