See above. You need to concentrate on your use of articles.Please correct it.
The subscriber of the above gas connection;
To whom it may concern (unless you have the name of the person you need to write to)
My family and I
are facinghave been experiencing alow pressure in the gas supply from your company for a long time.
Due to this low pressure,
of gas supplywe cannot prepare meals the timelyquickly. It takes several hours to prepare food for two personspeople and sometime we can notcannot boil milk or even make tea for guests. Due to the short of gas, supplywe buy gas cylinders to meet our cooking requirements and sometime buy food from restaurants. but I canít afford it because I am the salaried class person and canít shoulder extra burden of food from outside and buying gas cylinder.It is difficult for me to afford to do this.
Please note the main cause of low
gaspressure of gasis that there is five to six meter already fixed at my house on the thin gauge pipe line (I don't understand this part - there is a five to six metre what fixed?) I therefore request that you to pleaselook into the matter urgently and grantsupply mea new separate gas connection atto my residence.
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