black dust takes the form of a human being

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I would say 'Game of Thrones' is the best series I had ever seen if in the 4th episode of the second season, some black and creepy dust hadn't come out of a woman's womb. I mean, I had already seen dragons in previous episodes, but black dust that takes the shape of a human being? Come on!

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I would say have said 'Game of Thrones' is was the best series I had ever seen if, in the 4th episode of the second season, some black and creepy black dust hadn't come out of a woman's womb.