Are these sentences natural? May 24

[musicgold]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. How would you characterize your clients versus John's?

2. How would you describe your facilities versus those of John’s?

3. He bears a striking resemblance to Tom Hanks.

Thanks,
MG

[emsr2d2]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. How would you characterize your clients versus John's?
I would use "compared to" or "as opposed to" instead of "versus".

2. How would you describe your facilities versus those of John’s?
"Those of John", not "John's".

3. He bears a striking resemblance to Tom Hanks.
That sounds fine.

Thanks,
MG

My comments are above. I tried to change the colour of
my comments but couldn'tt do so on my phone.

[emsr2d2]

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. How would you characterize your clients versus John's?
I would use "compared to" or "as opposed to" instead of "versus".

2. How would you describe your facilities versus those of John’s?
"Those of John", not "John's".

3. He bears a striking resemblance to Tom Hanks.
That sounds fine.

Thanks,
MG

My comments are above. I tried to change the colour of
my comments but couldn'tt do so on my phone.