Sounds fine to me.
Does this sentence below sound OK? Or 'unaccompanied by their families' sounds like a dangler and therefore the whole sentence sounds awkward?
Companies send their male employees to distant offices unaccompanied by their families.
Last edited by Taka; 17-Jun-2012 at 14:36.
Sounds fine to me.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
So 'unaccompanied' works as a modifier of 'their male employees'?
It surely doesn't modify the offices!
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Good. So it works that way.
Thanks, Barb!