My suggestions are above.Hi! Could someone check this sentence and make any necessary corrections please?
In all ofDuring themy extensive work experience, which I have undertaken,I have worked well as a member of a team. However, I have also been responsible for self-direction,worked on my own initiative requiringwhich requires organisation, commitment, planning and co-ordination skills. For example, when working as a carer I was able to ensureensured that my clients received the highest quality of care whist maintaining a fair distribution of tasks between myself and my colleagues.
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