my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

[juliana2]

Hello there! I am writing a poem (well I'm trying) and I don't know whether the following expression is correct: my heartbeat is tuned in /with your pace.
Thank you

[emsr2d2]

In a poem, you can pretty much say anything you like.

[Raymott]

In a poem, you can pretty much say anything you like.

True, but I find it difficult to make sense of this one. Anyway, we'd normally say "tuned to".
(I'm guessing the object of affection is a race horse; as he runs faster, her heart beats faster in admiration.)

[Rover_KE]

(I'm guessing the object of affection is a race horse; as he runs faster, her heart beats faster in admiration.)

I'm guessing it's Usain Bolt.

Rover

[emsr2d2]

Juliana2, can you tell us in non-poetic words what you are trying to say?

[juliana2]

I'm trying to show that someone is so much in love that his/her heart is beating according to his partner's heartbeat or in general, way of living

[BobK]

There is a conventional idiom for this - which may have originated in poety - 'two hearts beating as one'. A rather more prosaic term is 'synchronizing', but I don't suppose that would suit your context!

b

[juliana2]

thank you

[Chicken Sandwich]

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