Identifying Clause Boundaries & embedded clauses???

[Krystle Kelley]

Hi Everyone,

I have to identify clause boundaries within a text, i am having trouble with the embedded clauses can some body help me by checking the clause listen below and inform me on what is incorrect.

Text
If you are medically fit, of average education and within prescribed age limits, make further
inquiries to-day by calling or sending the coupon below. Act NOW, there are benefits you cannot
afford to miss. Enlistment periods: Navy and Air Force, 6 or 12 years; Army, 3 or 6 years with
option of re-enlistment according to service requirements.
All the Services need young women, too, for many interesting jobs.


Clause List

1. if you are medically fit
2. of average education and within prescribed age limits
3. make further inquires to-day
4. by calling or sending the coupon below
5. act now
6. there are benefits you cannot afford to miss
7. enlistment periods: Navy and Air Force, 6 or 12 years; Army, 3 or 6 years with option of re-enlistment according to service requirements
8. all the services need young women, too, for many interesting jobs.




Please Let me know what you think is correct ???