Both are fine. The "during the time" is not natural though.
Teachers
Could you please to give answers to the following questions?
When I am going to say that "John found a wallet in the road during the time he was on his way to town." Which one of the following sentence can I use? If the both sentence are correct in grammar, is the problem in their emphasis?
1. When John was on gis way to town, he found a wallet in the road.
2. John was on his way to town when he hound a wallet in the road.
Thanks
Both are fine. The "during the time" is not natural though.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Hi,
If you wanted to stress the concept "during the time" in #1, I think you could also say "While John was on his way to town.."
Alternatively, you could simply state "On his way to town, John found a wallet in the road".
charliedeut
Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor (at present) a teacher.